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-C. S. LEWIS

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Sunday, January 23, 2011

It Just FEELS Right

skin. sweat. passion.
I swear I float when I leave your side
sighs. moans. delight. 
I smile simply thinkin of the ecstasy u provide
comfort. relief. perfection 
laying with you just feels so right 
dreams. hopes. wishes.
thoughts of u & I fill my head every night
unsure. hesitant. reluctant. 
they say if it seems too good to be true that may indeed be the case
smiles. laughs. blushing. 
the happiness that flashes across my face 
you. me. us.
we both have pasts whose thoughts about are the least bit favorable
tomorrow. next month. next year.
only time will tell if to continue we will be capable
always. forever. eternity. 
in these words I dnt believe
now. today. the present. 
i'll enjoy till the day you decide to up & leave...

1 comment:

  1. I love this one feels like u wrote it just for me!....Alicia

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